Monday, 30 July 2012
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Fickle Whore
Fuck you, inspiration
you come and go like rain
here then gone, i'm strung along
it's driving me insane
You burst in through the front door
ubiquitous and free
you quench my thirst, then leave, i'm cursed
You hide yourself from me
Absent inspiration
You've left me on the floor
waiting for the only cure
your knock upon my door
They say that lucks a lady
and hope's a sandy shore
and then there's you, red hot, then blue
A fickle, fucking whore!
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Comments (24)
Brilliant and so true!
Julee Cruise inspires the mind.
Wow!!!
I'd do her.
Yes! You may be the only reason I'm still on Xanga.
8===> ERECTILE DYSFUNCTION
you do something with rhyme. always? i'm not a rhymer. anyhow. funny, kinda vulgar, and very true.
That's no way to talk to a muse.
@promisesunshine - Yeah, always. I'm not a poet. I just throw these together when I'm to lazy to write something substantial
I am one but you better just sit there and like it! lol
Very good... Love your poems :)
I hate when it comes to me at night and then is gone in the morning. >.<
You a rapper?
So true! I love it! :D
true, but I can't everywhere as once.
awesome poem! You are quite creative! =)
too funny, and too true. For me it comes while I shower, and leaves when I dry off. So irritating.
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Why is it that the best way to get rid of writer's block is to write about how frustrating writer's block is? It's like saying the best way to run a mile is to jog in place for a few seconds, and then get really angry.
It comes to me when I have other important tasks hanging over my head, then it's gone when I actually have free time.
Well versed.